Same thing happens 2 me. i end up thinking all day , then when i go to lay down getting ready to go to sleep thoughts keep me awake.

I love this because I can relate to it well. The thoughts just never stop and even when we think " these never stop" it leads us to more thougths and they become never ending.

I would suggest you break the poem up a little bit more, just in my opinion it would look more appealing because your content is worth reading and I am sure many others will relate to it.

This is very nice..and.relatable :) 5/5