Comments : Its not personal?!...(mixed triple Haynaku)

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Awe..freakin..some!!!

    You got so much power in so few lines its amazing! Real thought provoking piece this one sweety, and, as always full of that attitude we've come to love in your writing.

    Your pen could slay dragons i swear :p

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Seeee how excited i get lol...double post :/

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      @.@...

      Attitude?!... Don't know what your talking about ;/ lol

      It was topic of conversation tonight...
      I did have a few choice words to say!

      Ooo and I like the mythology behind dragons...

      So as you've stated my pen could slay...

      You are now challenged to revive the intriguing beast

      - Dark fantasy M'boy...

      Give me something to get lost in :)
      Now I'm excited!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Lol......you calling me out eh??

    Ok i cant back away from challenge once set....one dark fantasy comin up!

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      The english boxer in you will never die...
      Gloves and boots exchanged, for pen and paper!!
      Hats off to you kiddo...

      Now I'm in a good mood :D
      Thank you x

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Natasha, this is awesome!

    I love when people say so much in so little words...First off, congrats on conquering this form! Epic...

    Second off, the sarcasm is perfect in this...life is personal. HA! I mean how can someone read that without chuckling like "duh why didnt I think of that?"...

    Why do I adore this so much? I dont friggin know but I do. Loved it!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is such a good little poem to read again and again. Well done for pulling off the form. x