This is well deep I loved how easy it flows and even tho it's formed it doesn't seem forced at all

Nominating !!!

Wow it is deep.

An almighty kick from your heavy shoe
Cracks my rib with it's routine performance.
Kicked right through from my bones to my heart
^^^
Omg this part is really touching, when you think how the physical pain is, then transfer it to the mental, it is really sad. Showed how close that person was to you.

Awesome job:)

@.@!!
Missy <3xx

What a portrait I've just painted,
with the crystal clear tools you've
given me...

Grr!

Violence tends to silence the pure heart... snuffing out the light within... your light is still burning, each time you write a piece such as this... heartbreaking and touching poem Saffie... you are precious <3