Comments : Sword and Sorcery...( Dark Intentions )

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    WOW!!
    That is one amazing piece of poetry!
    You took the title and just penned something totally awesome, this is perfection Natasha!!!

    I love the shape, that must have taken some time to get right, I can really see the sword, and all the little detail, it is just brilliant.

    The piece itself is dark yet strongly captivating, the story and imagery is breathtaking, and the creativity is jaw dropping,

    I am running out of ways to kiss your butt my friend, but everything is totally honestly amazing!!

    Good luck with the mic night!! That's awesome :)

    Nominated tomorrow for certain!!!

    Mwah
    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    @_@!!!!!!!!!

    SERIOUSLY WTF!!!!!!

    i am speechless at this piece....FLAWLESS!!!!

    NOMINATING FIRST THING IN THE MORNING!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Wild flower

    NATASHAAAA!!!!

    What is this? Looooove this poem:)

    GREEEAAAATTTT JOOOOB^___^

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Yeah...... this one needs nominated... wow!

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      THANK YOU GUYS!! :D

      Seriously the little smile emotion on
      Screen doesn't do any justice to what
      you've done to my face or really looks like...

      My cheeks gone red...
      Face is very warm...
      And I have a stupid random giggle with
      Massive smile...

      THANK YOU,
      this write... was for my heart,
      Which now feels honoured by you all <3

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I read it to Jim Natasha... He is a man who truly adores rhyme poetry... whenever I read to him a non rhyme piece his response has always been .. oh that's nice... ect..ect...

    So I read him this piece... and he said WOW!

    looked at me and said.. that piece needs to be nominated... yeah.. you smacked this!

    • 13 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you both for the title...

      This is my favourite challenge of all... I chew the title and see where my mind takes me haha
      (Usually takes me longer to pick a title than it does to write a piece)

  • 13 years ago

    by Wild flower

    GOOOO NATASHAAA!!^__^

  • 12 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Wow.... Just wow. I love your style of writing! You have a wonderful talent, I look forward to reading more

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "The length of this poem initially intimidated me slightly as often alot of authors struggle to maintain a strong piece for something so long, upon finishing reading however I was both pleasantly surprised and impressed.

    Not once did I find the poem to falter in terms of power or flow and the author manages to create such unique imagery from beginning to end that really allowed me to picture what they were describing. I liked the lines in brackets too, they were like a small verse all on their own, and also managed to add more depth and power to the surrounding lines.

    The imagery was right on par with the subject of the poem and I thought that the author did incredibly well at keeping the imagery, vocabulary and content so dark without turning the piece into bloody gory alone.

    I imagine the layout of the piece took the author some time along with the poem itself and each compliment the other very well.
    This was a wonderful poem"

    :)