Comments : Liquid Poison ( shaped poetry )

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!

    Oh my saffie...

    This is brilliant...

    You literally put a message into a bottle.

    Great write missy xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You done a awesome job on the shape of the bottle, it's perfect. Alcohol is nothing but liquid poison that will make your insides decay eventually. The only thing that threw me off was the litre... I'm used to spelling it liter, haha.