You said this is your first attempt and you rocked it:)
This is filled with mixed emotions and you made me feel the same way... Drips with emotions.... Loved it...
Awesome piece:)

Lovely, Pratikshya. Keep it up :)

Love never returned is the love that will last the longest...
Very sad poem...
5/5

Memories of love come happily and gone with our hearts broken.

Loved the way you wrote this, 5/5

mandy :)