Comments : Snow evening(Haiku)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    This was oddly strange,

    I mean the purple dove.. is it because it's cold?
    and the step like a ten month child was good.

    The way, I picture it was that the dove was walking on the snow. And it looked gracefully.

  • 6 years ago

    by mandy

    This was bright and beautiful, 5/5.
    I love the unique description, when we write how we feel the truth is often revealed.

  • 6 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is a well written haiku:)
    Good job.

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is a lovely piece. You picture the snowy evening well through your descriptions.
    Good piece(:

  • 6 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This was such a light poem. I love this. The attitude of it, made me feel like the words were floating as I read them. Wonderful.

  • 6 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Sorry, double post!