This needs to be a song....so beautiful!!

Beautiful Sonia

:)

Oh mercy I agree... this is a haiku song... So beautiful Sonia!!

Wonderful written sonia

Very powerful haiku, i am actually disappointed it is so short because you want more of it! Perhaps part 2? lol x

This has oceans of depth to it when it comes to meaning. Excellent poem my friend. You write gems:)

I love a poem that stops my brain in its tracks, slaps me around the head and shouts

'see, you aren't as clever as you think...'

***as he looks up the word deciduous***

Ahaa!!

Liable to shed it's leaves.
That one word has transformed my take on your poem.
You may be able to hide, but you know sooner or later you will be exposed again and have to face the world. Maybe you just want or desire a little time out.
Great little haiku and very very clever, far cleverer than me.