Comments : Occupied Damnation

  • 8 years ago

    by Mohan

    Lovely choice of words and completely different poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I'm not a fan of darkness because it tends to depress me. But this poem is incredible!

    My ears wring from the weeping and gnashing of teeth.

    ^^I love the wordplay within this sentence! Wordplay's make me happy, people seem to overlook them, but this on is well played.

    I think the entire poem is very well penned from the both of you.