Absolutly amazing i love the line
"and form a perfect symbiosis"

You surrender, you let her control in the bedroom...and you love it. I see this as a playful game between two lovers of who has the power at which time.

This piece has great imagery and full of passion, I love it. :)

Oh my,

Thomas your writing, I just love the improvement, the depth you go into now, the creativity, it keeps getting more raw and more beautiful and I'm just loving it...Very passionate write doll!

This is a beautiful piece and shows love with its true essence.
This line acted brilliant in your piece:
"and form a perfect symbiosis"
Excellent :)