Woow I love this piece, your wording, and your way of writing it. Great job:)

This is such an abstract piece of writing... it made me twist and turn my head, I had to read it twice and I love poems that make me do that, get me thinking.

I love the twist of words and almost sometiems writing of this piece....very interesting!

The word that comes to mind is "musical". speaks of isolation to me which doesnt match the jazzy feel of its rythme suggestive of a health near restored. made me think. wat more could i ask?