I can feel this! Amazing one and captivating. So true, sometimes love isnt the way we want it to be.
Keep penning(:

This is sad. And yet lovely. That's the word my mind could think of after the last line of this piece hits my eye.

But it isn't dark-ish.

Of all sadness, dissapointment, astonishment, and the willingness to let go of the love that one's love the most truly makes this piece looks beautiful instead of clarifying the fact the ones is hurt.

An apology for being attached, and for all the emotions and broken dreams that is freed; why do I never think of this before?

And so,
let us die, let me die,
lay me down like a flower
upon a grave, and let me
apologize for the only love
I ever craved.

^^^ that part made me want to cry!!! and it feels soo powerful written and emotionaly i'm blown away there isn't a single flaw i can see in this poem!!! 5/5

Queen Ashlin