Comments : Stars

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Wow... this is happy! *cough*

    Lol Clark one thing that completely bothered me and I must say it now is.... WHERE ARE THE STANZAS lol this would flow and look so much better with stanza's babe!

    But now for the good stuff lol, I like that you compared scars to stars, that was brillant. and

    Look at the stars
    Just look back at what was ours
    The star I picked for you still shines bright
    What a lonely night it is tonight

    So cute =) Keep it up!

    and don't forget to get rid of the symobls lol

    Love Jenn