This is very deep and emotional
well written 5/5..

This is very deep and emotional
well written 5/5..

DANG this is really good. I LOVE how you express the heart you have in your hurt because the guy doesn't like you the way you like him.

I am impressed by the emotion in this piece as well as the rhymes incorporated. Really well done!!

It must have been felt so good to write this poem, it's contains a sad part but also shows the interest the character has for this someone.