Comments : Alchemy

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This is like a little bomb.
    So powerful and so small.
    Line one leaves you exposed, this is me, take me or leave me.
    It is the truth there is nothing to hide.
    It is a message to your lover, the moment when he sees and feels the real you.
    I like how the poem is stripped (excuse the pun) right back to the words that tell us the most.
    Great little write.