Comments : Dancing > Drowning

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    More dancing less drowning, let's have faith that everything will be all right, but never forget that first we need to help ourselves that God will help us get out of a mess.

    But also know that not everything is in God's hands to fix, He gave people a free will, and unfortunately, those who do bad actions with their free will, God can't change it.

    It's a very uplifting poem, I really like.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Your faith is strong, I know that, I can feel it in this piece, and how you have used that faith to turn your life around, you look to God for direction and you believe he gives it to you, but what do you feel when the bad things happen, what are his intentions then? He cannot fix everything, but to you, he gives you strength, hope and that is enough.

    A very uplifting write here Chelsey, showing that faith is your saviour, your strength,
    written very well, and speaks volumes.

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