Comments : Blur

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I hope that day comes for you soon, Aubrey.

    This is a nice little poem, only one little typo I see...began should be begin.

    Great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    "begin" should be begin.

    Other than that, the ending hit home for me. This is well-written. And life teaching :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      :) thanks:)