Oh my gosh Jason! I actually hate repetition in poetry, but it keeps growing on me! I loved this!! I loved the repeated words leaving an echo in my ear, reitterating your point...that was awesome....I love the somewhat uplifting ending as well...I thought this was going to be a more in your face type poem when I read the first stanza, then at the end you talk about helping this person....

I also thought it was cool how it had a sing songy ring to it, then you mention this person is should sing a song.....this was a really catchy piece!!