Comments : A Frosted Feeling

  • 7 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the 'onyx existence'

    made me think for a moment,

    onyx is shiny? but very random,
    all appears good on the outside but there is a world of confusion on the inside?

    Just a guess.

    Then we go on to the 'fear of death'

    such an opposite to many poems I read on here. so many people embrace an afterlife a heaven etc...
    what if it doesn't exist?

    I love the whole despair/confusion throughout

    great write well done.