Very strong imagery."ive memorized each moment of your whispering campaign".love that. really all of it.intensisty comes accross.i feel like this guy doesnt know whose heart he's messin with.gotta read more of ur stuff.

I loved the whole attutude you use in this verse....the tone of accusation runs right through this poem with some terrific lines....

You, with machine-gun eyes,

bless your barbed-wire heart

to name just two! and you follow it up with such an amazing ending...loved it!