Comments : Your Love is a Mystery

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I like this one...

    did you by any chance focused on syllable count?

    6 syallbles on each line expcet "your love is a mystery" with 7 syllables.

    • 11 years ago

      by Kiino

      Thanks :)

      As for the syllable count, yes. Somehow im a person who's particular with syllable counts. But sometimes i feel it's really tiresome especially when i write long poems.