Thanks for making my eyes teary.
I read this while listening to a sad song, and I was moved like a thousand miles away.

This is beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.

One of the best poems I've read on this site. To my favorites now :)

It just shows your faithful side, MaryAnne.
And I am also faithful.
I believe that there is an end. But what's beyond the end is what's prettier than this present.

"The night will fall, but to
believe it's the end is to lose
faith in creation itself.
"

^ :) :) :) :) :)
OMG. I'll never get over this.

You are MARVELOUS, in all aspects.

Now Maryanne, this is what I call poetry!
The emotion was totally spot on, there was enough of it, yet it didn't suffocate the piece and the flow was smooth and sombre, it was beautifully penned and I like Abed, think this is one of the best I have read, it is amazingly crafted...

Beautiful work.
x

The night will fall, but to
believe it's the end is to lose
faith in creation itself.

^^

a perfect ending in my opinion

Hi MaryAnne, it was so lovely to get a comment from you. I'm doing ok, thank you.

This is different and very well put together. It really speaks to the readers heart. It touched me quiet a bit after writing my recent poem. You spoke from deep within with this one. I'll be sure to check in more often.

Take. Care.

Dani :-)

Wow, this is beautiful. It is very mixed emotions between darkness and light and it has a hint of edging towards the darkness until the end the light shines a bit brighter, like you will not give up because then you give up on everything.

Lovely poem.