This is fantastic! You really have a way with words; you know how to make words bend to your will. I loved your metaphors and imagery; they painted a very vivid picture for me. Great poem! 5/5

I've seen that very same sunrise. I love this. Very good ending.

I am in love with this, I read it before, and I read it again now. I still love it:)

Great jooob Natasha^_^