Comments : The truth behind love

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    This is a pretty little write...
    Inspiring the courage to get back on the horse so to speak... and love yourself for who you are, so that maybe that special someone notices you shine.

    "Broken heart repaired once more,
    Whether or not you find it again I cant say for sure
    but the day you find someone that will change your life,
    You feel suddenly alive"

    ^^ just a suggestion... I think the last line would work better if you switched it to " you suddenly feel alive"

    Nice piece :)