Thank you! I actually meant not to punctuate. I don't know if you have ever read e.e Cummings but I typically go after his style. The lack of punctuation, I hoped, would create a sort of chaos. It's supposed to describe md, and life is chaotic. The only punctuation I put in we're the commas, so that I could make it suddenly short -- I think it is called staccato.
I also used e.e Cummings style by paying particular attention to what I have capitalized. I mean for nothing to be capitalized except for the word "Looks" in the last bit (p&q requires the first word to be capitalized :p) but everything I do (aside from accidental grammar mistakes) is typically intentional.
Thank you, again, though c: