Comments : The flame

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Uhmm uhmm.. how can someone light up a flame under the water?

    i like the way this piece was constructed, I also like the thought process of how i was picturing the tree being cut down and this someone having his sleeves rolled up as it's shaking and the loud noise. My thoughts as I read it was that this someone was cutting the tree to create a fire.. but then under the water.. the idea of the flame went poof! there is no flame.

    then I am thinking that I am missing something because its in the love poems...

    would it be in reference to the love that is shown with your words of how this someone cuts the tree... I have no clue.

    • 11 years ago

      by zombiepikachu

      It was written to describe my boyfriend. It wasn't about how much I love him. It was just about his essence. Capturing him.