Forbidden kiss.. I see, on this one you have focus on a closer scene, it is really good.

the details as well as how you are feeling and hoping that he would kiss you but he didn't.

Aw...Aubrey this poem has a sweet sadness to it. I like the simplicity of your poems and how you have expressed your feelings here so nicely.

Nicely done...

Sweet but sad... :) & :(