Comments : Sorrow

  • 7 years ago

    by Natasha

    The simplest poem I've read today, but still the meaning is deep. Wow, you're good. Keep up the good work!

  • 7 years ago

    by Silentium

    Nice poem :)

  • 6 years ago

    by =The-Fairy-Mary-Poppins=

    I know this is simple and it's REALLY touching but it buggs me how it should be "I'll be in sorrow tomorrow", when you type "I'll be sorrow tomorrow" i know it's your poem but it buggs me just that other than that i want to cry since it's sooo sad but so beautiful i hope you take my advise and change it lol but you don't have to! :) 5/5

    Moria Bella Bair

    • 6 years ago

      by broken sword

      Thanks alot and yes sure i will c0rrect it.