Hello,

this is amazing. The imagery and 'just beneath' the surface excitement is tangible. Your efficient choice of words create a 'sumptuous' meal, in equally 'sumptuous' surroundings, with a 'sumptuous' date; finished off with the reader only imagining the night of 'sumptuous' love making ahead.

Wonderful writing. You leave this reader able to fill the gaps just by mere suggestion.

I look forward and hope to read more from you.

Take care,

Michael