Comments : Appointment

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Another powerful write, written in the most real and somber ways.

    A hospital, or care home. Either way the human conditions laid bare and clinical; all too much like death for my liking. I too would have fled my appointment.

    Again, excellent write. the weight of emotion is balanced perfectly with the language to create a poem of wonderful proportion.

    Take care,

    Michael