Comments : Better Way to Success [String Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    The life you're living -
    is like coffee, so bitter
    but also so sweet
    Smile to life, it smiles to you
    Respect it to get respect

    ^^^ YES!!!! I like this piece, I nod in the majority of the poem but this one was my favorite due to the simile of the coffee. Life is bittersweet but it keep us awake/alive, this one is by far my favorite write from you.