Comments : Your Value Besides What You Have [String Senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Don't measure yourself -
    by what you achieved but by
    what you still have to

    ^^This to me was the immediate selling point. You can usually tell if you'll want to finish reading, even the shortest poems, if the first stanza is good. This is great. It's such a strong piece, inspirational. It speaks about what is possible, and what us as human being needs to accept in certain situations.

    Very well written.