Comments : Bitter Alcohol

  • 6 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    This poem was excellent. Rather than just giving up, ending it with a knife. Drinking is killing her softly (At least that's what I got out of it).

    She wants it all to stop,
    but she just can't resist .
    Drunk; She'd rather sleep,
    than find courage to slit her wrist .

    This was powerful. She wants to stop, but can't. Keeps drinking and drinking until this kills her. An uncontrollable urge.

    This piece left me speechless really. Loved it great poem 5/5