Comments : Alienated Scheme. [Haiku]

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I am always likes the haiku,
    nice written...

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    Wow. Usually, I'm not a fan of haiku, but the way you wrote this, it's explosively powerful. I completely adore this. Such small descriptively loud words. It felt like such an extreme piece, but it's so little.

    Wonderful!

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Love Haiku's this one said a lot in the few words allowed. Excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I adore haiku's because of the ability to capture a snapshot of nature within just a few simple words...and you done just that.

    Wonderfully done! :)