Comments : Realization

  • 6 years ago

    by E Dacaf

    The and in the 2nd line should be removed it would flow better imho.

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is beautiful and optimistic. I love the flow! The rhyming! Simply awesome!!
    Keep writing:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I think writing for ourselves is a great release/activity, it usually comes down to some sort of realisation, and we'd oftentimes discover ourselves more. I especially love the ending lines; trusting yourself more. I think it's necessary to trust ourselves first, before we could truly trust anybody else. Great job!

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Wow, i love this from the beginning to the end, really beautiful. and i love the rhymes <3