Oh mercy mercy... this is breathtaking!

Hi, Chelsey ~ wow this piece really is something. Beyond that. I'll say it's amazing!!! The way you're defining the word 'perfect', and the imaginaery you painted in this piece, along with the euphoria-embroided-words that you put to use in writing this, it really is perfection!

And I do love the idea of perfection that you stated in this piece and made it so breathtaking to whoever read this! It is, this piece took my breath away, okay? Now, can I have it back?

Lol jk! Good job, girl! <3

Beautiful Chels , such a stunning piece
You redefined perfect.

Damn you, Chels! I always get lost in your poems, they just captivate me and I just become completely speechless. I can't ever leave a good comment because of it, lol.

The imagery is flawless... I just feel like I'm there...enjoying God's work...with a pina colada! haha

You definitely redefined perfect in this poem! <3

Nominated!

This is so beautiful, this is so breathtaking, wow.
x

You know, I tried to write you a decent comment more than once but I always find no words!! I read this piece to my sister, and to my friends and to myself more than once. There is something about it that made me feel alive, like I actually believed in love.

This poem itself had redefined perfect for me!
Stunning <3

xxx

(Weekly Contest Comment - 2/1/13)

The poetess has described Mother Nature and love all in one breathtaking write. The opening stanza had me hooked and I could picture everything, the colors, the trees, the water, the couple and I could hear the sounds of the waves crashing and the cawing of the gulls and I could smell the salt in the air and coconut... so many memories this write brought back for me having lived in Florida for most of my life... I could tell the writer felt and put so much passion into creating this masterpiece... (10)