Brianna,

For this gem to be without any comments just goes to show you this site has little to do with poetry at all. I wonder if they'd recognize real talent if they tripped over it;)

Amazingly beautiful and so true, loved the poem, my little sis <3

5/5 Ingrid

It is beautiful and full of wisdom. Well written and logical.
Excellent

These kind of poems are so rare to find, probably half-extinct due to their "old-fashioned" nature, but I find that these roots of poetry should be more celebrated, and you did so in a very classy manner, as always. ;)

Obviously I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme, you're getting very good at these metered verses. I feel a certain sense of serenity upon reading this poem, although it's a gentle nudge at humanity/morality.

Double post

Triple post.

Sorry! =/