Comments : Happy Valentine's Day

  • 7 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Wow! This is very powerful and vivid. I love the metaphor of a shield, and I definitely relate. It's hard to put your heart out there, after it's been trampled (by anyone), but it makes it harder for you to open it up the next time.

    Your title and the word veins are misspelled, unless that was intentional. Other than that, this is definitely a favorite. :)

    • 7 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you...:)

      I'm on my phone writing, the touch screen keyboard annoys me lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh HELLO! Now this is a powerful piece!

  • 7 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    One of your best poems! Love the wording and how simple the message of the poem is, we can all relate to it and the fact that they hurt us and we put this shield up, which in turn only hurts us more because we do not let anyone else near.

    Great work! x