Excellent title! very eye catching and drew me in right away. Very powerful wording and again a hint of sadness with perhaps hopelessness. Great work

Hopes are fading.
Sad and Good poem.

I love the title and the content of this poem, many times young ones are lure by the lights of Hollywood or just the thoughts of being popular and they sell their souls for a dream that will never become a reality.

Well penned...

I love the title and the content of this poem, many times young ones are lure by the lights of Hollywood or just the thoughts of being popular and they sell their souls for a dream that will never become a reality.

Well penned...

My favorite haiku tend to be about urban nature. Love it.

Another Haiku with a message! Well played...

~Andrew

I love the way you word something so important for people to realize. Wonderful