A very interesting piece of romantic work dear :)
. really liked it a lot specially this part
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Does Cupid's servant of romance
still shadow the Sicilian shore !!!!
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I see it the most affecting and meaningful part of the poem .

very well done my friend :)

Im surprised you do not have more work here. Just as I am surprised with how few comments you have. I adore the things you pen here. Each one is so perfect in its own way and they truly make the name "mermaids lullaby" fit.

This is no exception it is lovely.