Comments : Reality of life and people

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I have observed,life changing its face
    But not growing older day by day or decade..
    ^ this is really a sad fact^
    I have observed man changing appearances
    Inward outward dual decisive faces
    ^here you written very perfect about the two faces of human.
    I like every line in this poem and i think this poem is about what you observed in this world, exactly from your life.
    Great poem.

    • 11 years ago

      by Areeba Hashmi

      Thank you Mohan I really appreciate your comments.

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba Hashmi

    This is how life is and how people are ...Hippocrates ...