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  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lost battle as a title?

    Great insight in this poem, Rebecca. Only in hidsight do we catch a glimpse of reality and of how we spent our efforts.

    Did you meant to say "peace" in the second stanza, instead of "piece"?

    Well done and welcome home,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A truly sad but lovely poem Rebecca.
    I love these type of poems, well done!
    Great writing!