Comments : That Redneck

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is an darkening piece. It starts out light.

    The one with that sweet smile.
    The one with those brown eyes.
    The one with the brown curly hair.

    ^The first impression.

    The one with that all too deceiving smile.
    The one with those evil, lying eyes.
    The one with the moppy mess of hair.

    ^when you got to know him.

    I like this. It's heartbreaking, but I love it.