Comments : My bestie

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    There is a mistake sweetie like "are" is supposed to be "our" in
    Day by day are friendship grew
    but this poem is beautiful! :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Areeba Hashmi

      Lol yeah checked it out but couldn't find the edit option :P moreover when I wrote this poem I used short terms like for this "our" I used "r" :p so while in a hurry I just elongate all the short words without noticing
      By the way thanku for pointing out the mistake and appreciating ;)