For a first attempt at poetry I thought this was awesome , I loved the word choice, I can see from
This you are a very powerful writer

Well penned.

5/5

First of all, Welcome to PnQ :)

And I agree with Tony, for a first attempt this is pretty awesome. You have what it takes to become a great poet.

Keep it up!

Well this is a spiritual beauty here.. I do love the elegance in your words, and as my friends have stated, beautiful first poem... just beautiful! Welcome to PnQ :-)

Welcome to PnQ...

A spiritual and enlightening piece... This is very beautifully written, love the title. Well penned.

This piece is pretty good for a first attempt, nice title, works well with the piece, spiritual and beautiful, well done
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Nicely penned... Well done,

Welcome to P&Q and Free Spirits :)

Good poem. It creates an inviograting and soothing sight.