Comments : Serial Succubus

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oohhhh I love this!!! Excellent choice of words here, you set the scene so dark and eerie right from the get go.

    I freaking LOVE the story in this...described so perfect I could just see a man wondering in darkness, getting sucked in by darkness and losing all he ever was by surrendering to her wickedness...

    Awesome write I really enjoyed!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gabriel

    Yes indeed, this is a very dark, mythological, interesting poem though at the end I think you could have explained a little more on the tempted man's background but it still was good.