His figure condense, slowly wanes and wither;
like an apple blossom lack of dew.
^Oh how I loved this. I just love flower references, and though this one is simple it's perfect!

I love the entirety of this poem so much, there are so many moments in life where we have to decide which path to go down, and often we wish to stay with what we already know because the unknown is terrifying yet most of the time it opens up some awesome opportunities. I adore the way you expressed this, it's something we all go though everyday. The last two lines were so powerful & perfect for the poem. Though one little thing - breathe should be breath! Otherwise, you have a very unique way of writing, the bit of dialogue was something different yet it worked rather well. Lovely piece! :)