Comments : Neighbor Rights and Neighbor Limits [Double Senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This poem is neat, truly it's important to have a good relationships with those we live around; however, some boundaries need to be kept, I appreciate how this simple poem makes that point perfectly clear.

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    For some reason, I think of my twin's neighbor when I'm reading this. Because it's been a while since I got home.

    "You love your neighbor
    It's a good behavior
    but don't destroy the fence"

    Ah, if only some of my neighbors know about the 'fence' between one another. But not the twins, they're good kid. Apart from that, this is a beautiful writing, Khalid. I'm looking forward to read more of your 'double/chained' short poems.