Comments : Haiku

  • 13 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    It's very pretty the picture it paints with so little words it doesn't say whether it's night or day for both birds are awake both at night and day so for me it represents both light and dark...very beautiful! 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    Original title you got there ;)

    This reminded me of the Hunger Games when they used the birds to send messages. :) This was really a beautiful poem!

    • 13 years ago

      by Jenni Marie

      Hahahaha. I saw you online last night and laughed lots thinking..knew she'd be back haha!

      And yeah...I got sick of trying to think of so many titles!