Its unique. I like it alot! i like how all the lines worked beautifully together. dark , like i like it

Slaughtered under the moon,
was this sweet little girl.
Murdered by the goon
who had murdered her mother
^^^ that part gave me the shivers since if i ever have a daughter of my fleash and blood i would protect her... yeah that's just me lol but i really like this poem

Very well written, I really enjoyed this poem :) fantastic job!

Sad but well written.Keep writing.